Since teaming up with fellow colleagues Arif and Cristian, our ideas and storylines were discussed and eventually combined to create one short storyline with an ending insinuation a reoccurring event. My initial ideas, being iterated from A TellTale’s Heart, included a psychopath put into isolation, and rather than hurting the people around him my iteration shows the aftermath of how a person may feel from bottomless guilt after committing a sin (or in my characters example; mass murder and torture). My colleagues iterations were both similar, as they were of the text The Pale Green Pants. Their storylines were somewhat similar in terms of using the green pants themselves as a character, more so the antagonist. As a collective we decided that we can merge elements of each story together, and we developed this:

Basic plot:
– It’s raining, on the brink of thunder. Kid 1 (main protagonist) runs towards shops. Along the road, he notices stray pair of pants on the sidewalk after commencing the shop, decides to leave it alone. The pants make a strange roughing sound off camera, kid 1 looks behind and see’s it’s standing up right, floating in mid air. Kid stops and stares, pants fall back to the ground. Kid 1 picks them up, lightning strikes and reveals silhouette of old scrawny man (ghost of psychopath). Kid looks inside pants to see a dark abyss.. eyes turn white and becomes possessed. He pulls his eyelids, rips his flesh, goes crazy, as pants begins to swallow him whole. As he struggles, he disappears into the pants (like a black hole) and the pants hover for a moment, and drops. Rain calms down slightly, music stops, and kid 2 walks by and notices pants. He walks up to the pants, screen cuts to black.

Characters:
– Kid 1
– Kid 2 (re-purposed kid 1)
– Psychopathic silhouette

Set ideas:
– village cottages
– Shop (optional)
– Sandy brick colours, sepia tone
– Pavement
– Grassy sidewalk with trees

Big shots:
– lightning reveal for psychopath
– Closeup or dramatic high angle shot of kid 1 getting swallowed
– Pulling eyelids and latex ripping (skin) after being possessed
– Closeup of eyes changing colour (use Beverly from IT chapter 1 as reference)
– Long shot of sidewalk after pants swallows kid 1, and kid to appears (cut to black)
– Listening and reaction mid shots between kid 1 and hovering pants